ABP 1st draft_1.1 needs to be improved.Writing additional requirements(Refer to syllabus and reference attached)1. The technical details and historical account of the evolution of the battery market.2. Still needs further development and elaboration particularly the last part of the paper.3. Despite the thorough informational presentation, you need to better organize the flow of ideas and employ somewhat more reader-friendly style, avoiding all those lists of ideas using a bullet-point style and adding graphs and tables to summarize and visualize your ideas.(graphs and tables can be found through internet search.)4. Finalize suggestion part in the end about 1 or 2 pages in word.

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